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Post by Noir Souris on Sun 20 Nov 2011, 06:12



Help me improve please Smile

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Post by Garry on Sun 20 Nov 2011, 09:12

hey really slick little vid there noir souris. That's coming along well. You probably just need a bit more space to stretch more, but practice is all you need from here and using different surfaces is good too. You can use the rougher surface with more resistence to build up muscle strength, and smooth surface to get the glide and flow happening.

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Post by ModernHippo on Sun 20 Nov 2011, 11:11

Yea Abi, what Garry says

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Post by hardcore_shuffler on Sun 20 Nov 2011, 11:28

i agree with Garry,i also think that your accedentally transitioning from a 2step running man,to a 1step,which makes it look more"runny",try and keep your legs straight on the second step to start it off,then,once you've gotten comfortable with the stepping mannor,then you can be more loose and do your own style,or whatever your comfortable with,other than that,i saw great transitions of t-step and your moonwalks were totally great:)

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Post by eastcoastshuffler on Sun 20 Nov 2011, 13:51

hardcore_shuffler wrote:i agree with Garry,i also think that your accedentally transitioning from a 2step running man,to a 1step,which makes it look more"runny",try and keep your legs straight on the second step to start it off,then,once you've gotten comfortable with the stepping mannor,then you can be more loose and do your own style,or whatever your comfortable with,other than that,i saw great transitions of t-step and your moonwalks were totally great:)

Yeah I agree. The running man slipped into the 1 step sometimes. The editing was super awesome Very Happy

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Post by Noir Souris on Sun 20 Nov 2011, 19:07

Yeah I re-watched it and slapped myself haha Smile Thanks guys Smile

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