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Post by emiLywaffLes on Thu 31 May 2012, 04:25




So, after HOURS of stupid file convertions...finally got it up!!! Very Happy i'm still shy and i'll admit this is NOT my best :s but oh well, enjoy :3

Me and my friend mike at school - tell me what you think please!

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Post by Czarina on Thu 31 May 2012, 09:57

I think it's funny how your shuffling is a split image of my own when I first started.

All I can really comment on in this vid is your RM. There is too much energy going into the hop and you can't get the second hop in to break up your RM. There is also not enough energy going into your landing foot, so there's no 'oomph' in your landing foot. I'd suggest lifting your knee higher, coming down harder, and more in front like an actual stomp. Exaggerate it. This should create enough space for you to get two hops in, and you can give yourself more options.

Hope that helps Smile

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Post by Garry on Thu 31 May 2012, 11:04

hey great first vid emily, you should try some jump style too, it helps with balance training, hopping on one leg etc, to get some strength in your legs.

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Post by Adamc96 on Thu 31 May 2012, 22:03

I think it's nice for a first video. What I can say: work on the heel-flicking, and try to do the rm in 2 steps. When you did slower (at 2:15) it looked good, just try to straighten your leg in the 2nd step. Don't practice to music, just try to do it good, and after a while you will be able to do it faster. Your t-step is looking very good, and the fact, that you have fun while shuffling, is very good Smile Keep it up Wink

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Post by emiLywaffLes on Fri 01 Jun 2012, 03:13

^-^ thank you! I have been practicing my RM a lot - this vid was shot like a month ago, and like a week ago my bro recorded me [for that song calm soldiers] and it looked waaaay better... plus like i said, i was really nervous and shy >.< my parent's mocked me when i first started and i didn't start with much confidence.

but this makes me feel much better and ill be working hard alll summer ^0^

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Post by Noir Souris on Sun 03 Jun 2012, 08:52

Dance to express not to impress :3 Great start I agree with the others above! You have to remember everyone starts somewhere, and so far you've made great progress Smile Keep it up!

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Post by Rebound on Sun 03 Jun 2012, 20:21

I can't believe I missed this thread Shocked
I agree with the above posters, great first video. Work on the RM (I believe you have) and it'll all look much better Smile

And don't listen to your parents, they don't know anything. Do what you love to do, regardless if they like it or not. It's your life Smile

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Post by emiLywaffLes on Mon 04 Jun 2012, 23:08

i need to clean my basement so i can shuffle down there Razz when i do it upstairs it's loud apparently xD

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